Rate my ultimate yugioh deck?

I like that you're keeping the old fashion spirit alive! Anyway, you need to shorten your cards by a LOT. 40 cards maximum. The old Yu-Gi-Oh! style was more of a beatdown style (High ATK points), and that's what I see the plot in this deck is like. However, what is your theme? I don't think that random beatstick cards will cut it out for you. :/ I would recommend a Dark Magician deck since you're into that old-fashion charisma. It also wouldn't hurt to use modern cards being used today that may come in handy like Solidarity (Great ATK boost), or Book of Moon (Beatdown cards still might need some handy defense!).